IamSoLostRightNow Expert Vidder
Joined: 18 Sep 2006 Posts: 1070 Location: New York
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:09 am Post subject: Somewhere Between Unsure by PrincessSparkle |
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It was a bit choppy, but totally original. I liked the way you used clips from her other show. It fit very well with the rehearsal dinner. I also think the end scene was good. You should have gone back and forth a little more in some of the AU scenes because we're trying to understand where they are and what they are arguing about but you changed it too fast so it just looks like a bunch of scenes mushed together. I think it was good the way you cropped the Nikki's head in some of the scenes. That's always more convincing! |
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